tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post3073353386302292015..comments2023-10-01T08:27:04.890-07:00Comments on `mirna `Creations: TUJHE BHULA DIYA`PART 18Mirnalinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14959030157314269052noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-18899832175910518492012-02-26T10:46:42.948-08:002012-02-26T10:46:42.948-08:00awsome........loved it........thnx for pm
-----pri...awsome........loved it........thnx for pm<br />-----pri12Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-17112976454313011582012-02-25T22:18:55.175-08:002012-02-25T22:18:55.175-08:00THIS WAS A GREAT UPDATE - BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED, CAN...THIS WAS A GREAT UPDATE - BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED, CANT WAIT TO GET TO PART 19. <br /><br />ONCE AGAIN THANKS FOR THE PM.<br /><br />AKHILASHAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-39464117852239510972012-02-25T20:52:55.498-08:002012-02-25T20:52:55.498-08:00Mirna this was the best chapter of the story so fa...Mirna this was the best chapter of the story so far..So emotional, my heart went out to Arnav..Your writing is effortless!<br /><br />-TanuAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-62133064399820806312012-02-25T19:44:22.840-08:002012-02-25T19:44:22.840-08:00so emotional.loved it,
this is ajoop from if:)so emotional.loved it,<br />this is ajoop from if:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-72899566755409677972012-02-25T16:50:26.189-08:002012-02-25T16:50:26.189-08:00that was a very beautiful amazing and awesome upda...that was a very beautiful amazing and awesome update:)this is my most fav part in this series i think.....it was emotional....i just can not point out that this part of the update was good......every word of the story was great:)continue soon...alicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00629264109120671712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-18178100549653279082012-02-25T15:14:05.644-08:002012-02-25T15:14:05.644-08:00awww..such a heart-retching update...He can't ...awww..such a heart-retching update...He can't stay away from up but she is going thru so much emotional upheaval in current condition.Sonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10237749069398223586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-37873085425138139452012-02-25T13:44:39.912-08:002012-02-25T13:44:39.912-08:00i cried reading this part. i really hope he finds ...i cried reading this part. i really hope he finds out the truth<br />(zeee)<br />xxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-52682280759650059022012-02-25T13:19:40.495-08:002012-02-25T13:19:40.495-08:00awwww how sweet.......Arnav is just too much to st...awwww how sweet.......Arnav is just too much to stay angry at....he's LOVE!!!!nabila(18shabbo)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-66948771200240540472012-02-25T13:13:14.585-08:002012-02-25T13:13:14.585-08:00Aww..tht was soo emotional..lovely updateAww..tht was soo emotional..lovely updateAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-35461152573973734142012-02-24T13:44:55.360-08:002012-02-24T13:44:55.360-08:00That was awesomeThat was awesomeanita_21492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-62055154267517369332012-02-24T10:42:52.905-08:002012-02-24T10:42:52.905-08:00Awww...that was totally awesome!! Thanks for updat...Awww...that was totally awesome!! Thanks for updating!!<br />kdkumarAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-195210233489186472012-02-24T08:45:37.783-08:002012-02-24T08:45:37.783-08:00that was so emotional... loved it..
arnav needs he...that was so emotional... loved it..<br />arnav needs her badly.. now tht he is trying to know the truth hope the family tells him everything.<br />pls continue soonanamikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05537764640154801709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-27234213148206820272012-02-24T06:09:13.347-08:002012-02-24T06:09:13.347-08:00Awwww!!
So glad you updated! That was beautiful! ...Awwww!!<br /><br />So glad you updated! That was beautiful! Khushi comofrting Arnav, and Arnav completely confused, angry and jealous!!<br /><br />Amazing work!<br /><br />Do continue soon! :DKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15665968383452093856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-82107188338387773592012-02-24T06:02:20.949-08:002012-02-24T06:02:20.949-08:00You've written this beautifully! No matter how...You've written this beautifully! No matter how much she stayed away from him,he just can't he needs her!<br /><br />I love the "Don't ever leave me" paragraph he actually told her how he exactly feels and accused her of why she left him for his brother. I'm glad that she didn't question him.<br /><br />The kiss was cute and much needed, can' wait to read moreLyssaPiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07594432832441602212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-28581826650842047152012-02-24T05:51:16.987-08:002012-02-24T05:51:16.987-08:00very touching !!! cried seeing arnav vulnerable......very touching !!! cried seeing arnav vulnerable...he almost sounded like small kid !! superb writting :)prerna salianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07611776561512463378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-45984262409091597542012-02-24T05:19:18.771-08:002012-02-24T05:19:18.771-08:00That paragraph...from 'Don't ever leave me...That paragraph...from 'Don't ever leave me...' - AMAZING! So heart breaking. Brilliant writing.neverbeforenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-86720902735176779092012-02-24T04:56:43.755-08:002012-02-24T04:56:43.755-08:00Oh WOW! This has got to be my most favourite part....Oh WOW! This has got to be my most favourite part. It was beautifully written and I love the progression in this story. How you conveyed Arnav's need for Khushi, despite thinking that she's married to someone else, and his possessiveness ;) Loved how he was able to break down and cry only in front of her only. Amazing work Mirna :D <br /><br />ISAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-24072843511055572842012-02-24T04:33:03.151-08:002012-02-24T04:33:03.151-08:00aww..wow..
arnav missed khushi and he came to her....aww..wow..<br />arnav missed khushi and he came to her..<br /><br />was really really cute..<br /><br />please continue soon..:)<br /><br />aakriti120Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-35759662986642085682012-02-24T02:30:52.308-08:002012-02-24T02:30:52.308-08:00This is amazing! I loved it! Please update soon. :...This is amazing! I loved it! Please update soon. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-7101237528327612092012-02-24T00:29:41.754-08:002012-02-24T00:29:41.754-08:00very emotionalvery emotionalmeenalumahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844975403821233939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8745494243144507087.post-85947783378902641532012-02-24T00:03:55.142-08:002012-02-24T00:03:55.142-08:00Its very sentiment to read.Its very sentiment to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com