Sunday, 15 April 2012


“What the!”

“Oh! Look who’s here!”

Arnav turned around to face the bearer of this annoyingly excited voice in annoyance, only to see Lavanya peer into the room housing the cozy lovers along with him.

“What the hell Lavanya! What are you doing here? And what in the name of god are you so excited about!” He growled at her.

Lavanya gave him a pointed look that clearly said ‘You can whine all you want, makes absolutely no difference to me whatsoever’, and then pointing to the pair inside explained.

“Him, ASR. Kunal is here! Oh! I am so excited!”
Arnav turned his attention back to the scene inside as he regarded the man still wrapped around Khushi.

“Who’s he?”

“He’s Kunal Chopra. Khushi’s suitor.”

“What the!”

“Not again ASR! Enough with your ‘WHAT THE’s already!”

Arnav grabbed Lavanya by the shoulders as he forced her to face him.

“What do you mean Khushi’s suitor?” he asked her urgently.

Lavanya rolled her eyes at his stupidity. “You are still just as thick in the head as you were all that time ago. Khushi’s suitor meaning, he’s in love with Khushi and has been trying to get her to marry him for as long as I can remember. You have to listen to him profess his love for Khushi! He does it every half an hour. Meaning every half an hour that he’s around her of course. And he uses the most magical language ever to do that! Kunal’s an amateur Shayar you see. And Khushi simply loves his Shayari! Oh! What amazing Urdu that guy uses! It is just so dreamy!

Listen, ASR. I know you’re weird and all. But I really wanna go and meet him. So please excuse me.”

Arnav watched Lavanya hurry by him with a bewildered expression on his face. Khushi’s suitor! This Shayar who had been spouting urdu and hugging and kissing Khushi intended to marry her, and was doing everything in his power to accomplish that task! And here Arnav had still been pondering over what to do with these weird emotions that surfaced every time Khushi was around! Lavanya was right, he really was thick! If he wanted Khushi in his life, he’d have to work fast. ‘Cause he very obviously had a lot more competition than Dhruv Singhania. Now Kunal Chopra was also in the race.

“Khushi! In my cabin, now!”

Khushi had barely registered Arnav’s thundering voice amidst the noisy get together, that he had even left. Shrugging at the questioning looks of her friends, she marched up to the devil’s cabin to find out what he wanted, and give him an earful about the way he was supposed to behave with her.

“Come in!” sounded his crisp voice.

“Listen Mr. Raizada! You can’t just talk to me however you please! I am not that old Khushi Kumari Gupta who’ll bear all your nonsense without a scruple of any sort! Do you understand me! I will not be spoken to in that tone….” And Arnav watched on, amused, as she went on and on. Not even stopping for a breath while she told him off.

Khushi did not realize when amidst her rant had Arnav advanced towards her, and trapped her between himself and his desk, not leaving any room for her to escape. Her words got caught in her throat when the strong heady scent of his aftershave wafted to her senses, and clogged her brain, making her privy to the compromising position that she was in. She looked up at him unsurely, his nose an inch away from hers. Tingles shot through her body as she felt him stroke one of her arms from her fingertips up to her shoulder, and then back.

He felt her shiver at his touch, as her eyes fluttered close involuntarily. Encouraged by her reaction, and the fact that she had not pushed him away, he decided to push his luck, and wrapped his other arm around her waist.

Khushi felt her senses give her a red siren as Arnav pulled her flush against himself. She shivered as every inch of her body pressed against every inch of his. She could feel the contours of his hard muscles against her petite frame.

Arnav fought for control as he felt her soft body grind into him. He slowly took hold of her hips, and lifted her slightly off the floor, pulling her further into him and between his legs. She trembled with the contact. Never before had anyone touched her so intimately, let alone a man. She felt her core moisten, as a searing hardness pulsed against it. Her soft breasts fought for breaths against his constricting chest, while he kept her plastered to his body. She clutched his shoulders for support as she if her entire existence hung by a fragile thread, at his mercy.

The hardened tips of her breasts rubbed against his own hard tips through the feeble fabric, as heat radiated through their bodies.

“Go out with me.”

Her eyes snapped open as she felt his hot breath whisper into her ear. Pulling her head back, she looked into his scorching eyes. Eyes that spoke of passion, eyes that spoke of dire need, and eyes that spoke of the denied connection they had always shared. But these pools of warm honey that stared back at her this moment no more denied. They accepted, and they sought the same acceptance from hers.

“Go out with me.” He whispered again, this time his warm breath falling onto her quivering lips. He pulled her hips further between his strong legs, making his need for her blatant.

Khushi gasped as the friction between their bodies produced scorching heat that plummeted her senses beyond sanity. Holding onto him for dear life, she gave him her answer.



  1. thanks a lot u updated........

  2. update soon!!

  3. loved it loved the jealous asr so demanding awesome update

  4. Not can you stop there??? DAMN great usual. Arnav is man out for war with nothing in hand a chance to loose it all if he doesn't get it together!! Jealousy seems ot bring out the worst and the best in because finally he will be prompted to something to change the circumstances, and worst, because he will pull out all the stops....obliterate his competition!! Looking forward to the next part!

    Watch out he comes!! ;0)

  5. i hav just read all 11 parts right now at 2 in the night :-D
    lovely work, please pm me if u can--i'm on ur buddy list as rani-lucki
    thank u :-D

  6. Thank you for the update! Man, I didn't want Khushi to give in so easily! But then's ASR! LOL...Can't wait for the next update.

  7. Aaaawesomme update! Can't wait for the next part! Please PM me cuz I don't recieve a PM for this part..! Thanks :) xx it's shahid_lover on your buddy list btw :))) x

  8. yay you updated this at last! oh so theres another guy in the race? niceeee! cant belive khushi agreed to go out with him after some touching. so much about woman power, lol. i found the suitor guy funny the way lavanya described him. arnav wud rip him to shreads, lol. got a question. arnav said go out with me?....isnt the answer supposed to be ok, instead of yes? :D

  9. Khushi said yes
    Waise Arnav seduced her for the ans hehehe

  10. I loved the update. She uses said yes!!! But who would say know when Arnav asks like this. I think Khushi said yes in a daze. I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue soon.

  11. Awsome update loved it kushi said yes yay.
    Thanks for the pm.

  12. Awesome...
    jealousy is playing in gud..
    hmm khushi said!!!
    continue soon

  13. Nice update! Waiting for the date now!

    Thanks for the PM!

    _ Sivaranjani.

  14. amazing update...gosh arnav is just too passionate!!
    OMG..she said 'Yes'...i mean who wouldn't ;)...but still she did say it!
    u hv stopped at such a place...cant wait to read further!
    continue soon :)


  15. Superb Update
    Continue Soon
    Thank You So Much For The PM

  16. Amazing what a bit of jealousy can get a man to do.....this was obviously the wake up call Arnav needed to start his pursuit of Khushi!!!

    Thanks for PM


  17. Update quickly Loved it Sirul

  18. lovely !! please update the next sooooon :)

  19. Superb Update:)


  20. omg its been more than a month, i have been visiting ur blog everyday hoping to find an update. Just curious hope ur doing good.

  21. Are u going to continue with this story? It has been started really well and it would be a shame to stop now.

  22. OMG the is amazing but u seriously seriously need to
    Continue this PLEASE EASE EASE

  23. omg!!!ustopped???:(
    khushi said yes??
    of course who wouldnt with asr workin his magic??

  24. Please please please update soon dear!!:(

  25. Eagerly waiting for ur updates...

  26. Loved it,great,she melts when he touches her.they still have it.Go for it Raizada

  27. read all 11 parts in one go, it is damn interesting but why you have stopped writing this fiction? please continue if you can. (IF user laksh65)