Sunday 15 April 2012

TUJHE BHULA DIYA`PART 25


It was Holi today. Two days after the whole fiasco at the breakfast table, when Arnav had stormed out of the house, and had still not returned. His phone was switched off, and everybody was very worried.


Khushi had given Akash hell over what he had done, and had outright refused to talk to him. And she wasn’t the only one, everybody was very upset with him. He too felt guilty over what he had done. Yes, he had intended to play a prank on his brother, but never had he expected things to get so messed up!





The house was beautifully decorated with flowers and colourful curtains hanging off of every door, window and pillar in the house. The Shamiana was set up outside the house, decorated just as beautifully as the house itself. Tables were laden with mouth-watering jalebis, rabri, gulaab-jamuns, and every other sweet brought in only from the best Halvais in Lucknow. Handis full of thandai and bhang adorned every corner of the field, where people were gathered, and merrily playing Holi. Throwing colours and drenching each other in coloured water.


Huge thals full of gulaal of red, green, blue, yellow and every other colour in the rainbow added joy to the already joyous occasion. Laughter rang every time a stranger wished another a very happy Holi with maybe a modest touch of gulaal, a kid smeared her friend’s cheeks conspiratorially, a sister emptied a bucket full of water over her brother’s head, and a lover toyed with his beloved flirtatiously.


Khushi took in the mirth and the merry with eyes brimming with tears. No colour adorned her on her favourite festival except for the red smear of Sindoor on her forehead. She had refused to take part in the festivities. No matter how much everybody tried to persuade her otherwise. If she was to play Holi, it’ll only happen if her husband initiated it for her, and she was adamant about it.



“Bhabhi.” Akash addressed Khushi in a low morose tone. After getting no response from her whatsoever, he decided to continue anyways.
“Bhabhi, I’m really very sorry. I know there is absolutely no explanation that I can offer for what I have done, but I just want you to know that I never intended to hurt you or Bhai. I just…”


“You just what Akash! You just thought it’d be a good idea to mess with an Amnesia patient who is probably going through the worst crises of his life! 

How very thoughtless of you Akash! He’s been trying to put himself together, string his life to make some sense out of it. Been trying very hard to just live in the moment and not think about what’s true and what’s not. He doesn’t remember anything! He’s confused about things, and is in a very delicate mental condition. And now we have no idea regarding his whereabouts. I swear Akash! If absolutely anything at all happened to Arnav, I swear I’ll never ever forgive you! And for now, it’d be best if you did not show me your face!”


And with that said Khushi walked off, leaving a guilty Akash behind.



She made her way through the Shamiana, to a secluded spot away from the crowd. Leaning against a pillar, she closed her eyes and sighed. She reminisced over the magical month she had spent with Arnav clucking over her like a mother hen. Smiling sadly, she wiped the tears off her cheeks as they finally spilt over. Her heart was heavy with grief, as she pondered over what turmoil he must be going through right now, and worry pulsed through her as she wondered where he must have gone. His secretary had called the day before to inform them of the overseas meeting that Arnav had suddenly departed for, not divulging the details of his meeting, nor the place he had left for.



She was brought out of her reverie as a pair of hands suddenly covered her eyes and a familiar voice whispered into her ear.

“Yeh haath nahi, faansi ka fands hai Gabbar!”


Khushi’s tired lips stretched into a soft smile, as she pulled the hands away from her and replied.

“Yeh haath mujhe dede Thakur!”




Khushi and Dhruv pulled each other into a hearty hug as they saw each other after almost eight months. 
When Khushi had first met Dhruv Singh Raizada after her marriage to Arnav Singh Raizada, she had realised that he was the one who she’d get along with the most in the entire house. Not only did they share each other’s love for food and cooking, they were both huge Bollywood junkies, and loved to enact scenes from movies and serials.

As they pulled apart, Dhruv noticed the tear tracks on Khushi’s face.

“Hey! What’s wrong? Oh, I get it! Emotional reunion huh!” he winked at her.



Khushi slapped him on the chest as she laughed at his cheekiness.





The rage in Arnav’s eyes combusted into flames, as he took in the scene forth him. Khushi hugging Dhruv. Khushi laughing with Dhruv. Dhruv wiping away Khushi’s tears, that had been borne of the joyous reunion most probably? He was touching her. Touching what he had claimed as his own. Touching what only he was supposed to touch. Had he touched her before? Dhruv was her husband. Had he touched Khushi before? But she had said that he, Arnav was the only man in her life. Then why the hell was she letting Dhruv touch her!

Eyes red. Fists clenched .Body taut.
Arnav Singh Raizada advanced towards them with murder in his heart.

83 comments:

  1. Intense, intense intense!

    Why would you leave us here?? Please continue soon!
    I am dying to know what happens next!! :D

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  2. OMG....i am feeling so sorry for Dhruv already, i sure would't like to be in his shoes!!!!! i just hope Khushi can handle her husband in his furious state!!!!

    Thanks for PM

    Honkytonk

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  3. The story is getting so much intense now!

    Update soon.. Dying to know what will happen next!

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  4. i think arnav will kill dhruv lol! much needed speech to akash.
    why the hell would he play such games.. update soon :)

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  5. Awesome...
    wonder wht arnav would do.. feeling bad for Dhruv...
    continue soon

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  6. awesome update
    feel really bad for dhruv,want to know what arnav will do next
    plz continue soon
    thanks for the pm

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  7. awsomeeeeeeee

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  8. loved it!

    poor dev!

    I hope that khushi will be able to make arnav understand

    continue soon!

    -Sweet Scorpio.

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  9. i wish arnav by mistakes hits akash and not dhurv :)
    please continue soon
    thanks for the update and pm
    -lwfw

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  10. Superb update.
    Loved it. It was insensitive of Akash and I am glad that Khushi hasn't forgiven him.
    So Dhruv is back and Arnav watched Dhruv hugging his Khushi and now his blood is boiling for murder.

    Can't wait to read more.

    Continue soon. Thanks.

    Zafi

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  11. heya

    that was really intense...

    arnav disappeared...poor khushi..

    omg dhruv is back and arnav saw them together...

    wonder what will happen next..

    please continue soon..

    many thanks for the pm..: ]

    aakriti120

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  12. ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! More!!!! :p

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  13. awesome part dear...
    plz continue soon...

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  14. Great update so intense arnav getting mad seeing dhruv with kushi hope kushi can handle her husband. Getting intreasting continue soon thanks for the pm.

    Shyperson

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  15. wonderful part!!

    dbr_kmichi

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  16. Mrinalini, thank God you are back! I thought you had abandoned this absolutely wonderful story! What an update, and what a cliff hanger of an ending! Now you have to update ASAP! I am glad Arnav is safe, and boy, is Dhruv in for a thrashing or what! Do update soon :)
    -Laddoo

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  17. Great update plz continue soon..
    ajoop
    if

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  18. I loved the update
    Can't wait to read more
    Lil_kuri

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  19. please update as soon as u can cos this is too interesting :-)
    rani-lucki

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  20. Superb
    Thanks For The PM

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  21. OMGGGG!!!!!!!!! feel worried for dhruv. hope arnav finds out the truth sooon
    so great part
    zara
    xxx

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  22. Loved it so much!! Will u be cpntinuing ur other sotory as well??

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  23. OMG, the confrontation is coming!! Poor Dhruv is probably clueless as to what is going on...hahaaa Love this whole amnesia bit. Quite brilliant!!!

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  24. LOL perfect moment for Arnav to show up! Loved the update!!!

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    1. okay so your update got the biggest smile on my face!! i loved khushi and dhruv's scenes and their easy bond! enacting sholay scenes!! hahah soo cute. though dhruv will probably see stars in the day light when arnav beats the crap out of him! poor guy! perfect timing arnav and dhruv both have i tell you!! hahahaha! and arnav is a well known idiot, he'll just believe wat he sees! and i really hope he drags khushi into their room and does stuff to her *guttermind on high alert :D* i absolutely loved the update!!
      and poor akash was yelled at! aww. though i do think his prank was funny *sheepish smile*. poor guy, so much for having fun!
      loved it mirna!! :D :D :D
      insanelycrazy :D

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  26. OMG!! You can`t stop there....you much continue soon!!!! Can`t wait to see what Arnav does and poor Dhruv!!!
    kdkumar

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  27. loved the update poor khushi still she can't tell him the truth poor arnav thanks for the pm

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  28. danm not first this time *pouts.* Did Arnav bring Dhruv back to figure out whats going on??(perhaps why Dhruv didnt come home when he learned that his "wife" was preggy) I'm mean the both of them showing up at the same time like that.....kinda iffy lol.
    -MB

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  29. OMG OMG THIS IS AMAZING!!
    Damn Arnav actually left for so many days and poor Akash is suffering as no one is talking
    uh oh all hell is gonna break lose! Arnav saw all that
    Very good update

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  30. uh ohh!!! dhruv is gonna die
    hopefully in holi they will clear the misunderstandings
    and give some piece of mind to our bigda nawab aka arnav
    thanx for the pm and plz plz plz cont. soon:)

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  31. Nice part
    Dhuruv toh gayi paka
    Akash did wrng
    Dnt knw what will happen nw
    Afsha

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  32. Awesome update!I feel really bad for Dhruv,What will Arnav do next?

    (tinsel)

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  33. So that was something really great!

    Update soon! i'm sure Dhurv will let the truth out!


    -areeba_blossom

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  34. that was really intense!! glad that khushi gave akash a piece of his mind!!
    gosh arnav saw them hugging..what a timing to return!!
    wonder how will he react now...interesting!!
    u hv left us on such a cliff-hanger...update soon :)

    aditi07

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  35. OMG!! Can't wait for the next part. Theres gonna be a murder soon! Plz update soon!!

    ~ Saima

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  36. I finally caught up to this FF and omg this is amazing. It's become one favorite FFs. I loved every single part. I love the chemistry you have built up in Khushi and Arnav. This so well written. I finally get caught up and you leave us at such a big cliffhanger. I can't wait, really... Can't wait to read the next part. Please please please continue soon.
    rockinggirl5

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  37. why did you stop there?? that was amazing!!! dhruv tho gaya!!!

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  38. great part
    waiting for more of Arnav's anger
    plz continue soon

    Prerna1

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  39. *gulp* and i thought Akash had it bad, Dhruv is going to die O_O But still glad to know Arnav didn't leave his wife on Holi :) Great update Mirna, suspense will be killing me ;)

    IS

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  40. PLEASE continue soon! I am dying to know what happens next!!

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  41. I know that the end was a cliffhanger and requires me to react in a similar way, but I must say..

    "yeh haath nahi faansi ka fanda hai GABAR" and "Yeh haath mujhe dede THAAKUR" totally reminded me on SGP...and seeing as it is over and I constantly cry for it now...I loved that you incorporated these lines into the story, which is a brilliant masterpiece BTW :)

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  42. Well am new here but i became an instant fan to your work, all i can say girl you rock, I am in love with your story. It got me glued to my laptop all day that i loose track of time. I have read the whole thing from beginning and could stop. Please update soon cant wait and keep up the good work.

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  43. plz update soon dear...its really interesting n enjoyable :-)

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  44. UPDATE PLEASEE?? Your story is AMAZING. *_*

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  45. just read through the whole story but why the hell you suddenly dropped writting.please yaar write immediatly waiting for it.why do you do this to your readers you have stopped writting the difficult love also without finishing it.pls pls pls

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  46. OMG!!!!!!
    plzzzz continue.....plz plz plz.........

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  47. the story is awesome
    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
    n plz also pm me

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  48. continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  49. It's amazing your FF s are simply great but u really really need to continue them!!!! pLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ALLLL OF THEM SOOOOONNN

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  50. Its the end of the august now dude
    PlZ write soon
    Plz plz.plz come back
    I'm dying to explore more into this story

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  51. Please update. Just read the whole thing in one go, and I reallllllyyyyyyy want to read more

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  52. I've just read all the posts in one go, and I truly love this story. You had me laughing when Akash picked the paratha off the floor, stressed when Arnav was retelling his dream to Khushi, blushing when you wrote the passionate scenes between Arshi, and just filled with suspense at this post. Please please please update. It's at such a cliffhanger right now and I NEED to read more

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  53. pls update......waiting for it

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  54. I read this one at a stretch and was totally mesmerized...please update this story.. I'll be waiting.

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  55. cant wait foe the next update...loved to see what arnav will do?

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  56. read at one go.awesome.
    update please.
    rehana

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  57. continue soon please. i read all the 25 chapters in one stretch. it is a gripping story.i just loved it. i really loved it. it is a very good plot. the way you portray arnav's helplessness and struggles and kushi's suffering is really really wonderful.i cried, laughed my head out, raged with fury for akash, smirked with nani and others at arshi's passionate night that mortified the whole raizada clan....wow wow wow all in all this was a pleasant journey. i would like to read this story further. so if u don't mind let me know when you update. plzzzz

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  58. I stumbled on this just now and read all 25 chapters in one go. This is HANDS DOWN the best FF I have ever read and believe me, I've read quite a few!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish the story.....

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  59. I just stumbled across your story and read the whole thing in one go. This is HANDS DOWN the BEST FF i have ever read, and I've read quite a few! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue and finish the story.

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  60. I just stumbled across your story and read the whole thing in one go. This is HANDS DOWN the BEST FF i have ever read, and I've read quite a few! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue and finish the story.

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  61. I've been waiting forever!! Please update soon! :) I'm dieing inside with all this anticipation of what will happen next!

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  62. Vn vl u updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAaaaAaaAttttttttttttttte r u ok

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  63. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS BEEN WAY TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  65. Please mirna. Come back and update.

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  66. hey dear!!! when are you updating??? Its been ages... u promised to update soon hv been patiently waiting cant wait nemore... pls pls pls pls update..

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  67. hai update soon dear........

    plzzzzzzz................

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  68. Great FF.truly giving KKGSR.confused ASR.keep it up.

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  69. Awesome ff! I am so desperate to know what happens next. Plz update this ff....it seems like you havent updated it in a while...

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  70. Why don't you update dear? It been more than one year!!

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  71. Hey ... I read this whole FF, AAAAGAAAAIN ... PLEASE UPDATE THIS .. DON'T LEAVE US HANGING .. ITS BEEEEEEN A LOOOOOONNNNNGGGG TIME, ALREADY .. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAJ :'(

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  72. will u update this story....it has been verry long..really missing your writing...

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  73. I have just finished reading onceagain your fabulous FF right up to Chapter 25. Amazing story and well written. Fabulous. Where is the link to rest of the Chapters. I am Laura and my ID is lara3110. Please send me the link. Thanks a million.

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  74. Hello - I just read this ff from the beginning all in one go! I think it is amazing! Can you update please?

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  75. story is amazing, please update the story

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  76. Its an amazing story....
    I really loved it....
    Please post it soon ....

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  77. Pls try to finish the story...

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  78. IT IS BEEN YEARS, YOU HAVE LEFT THE STORY IN CLIFFHANGER, KINDLY REQUEST TO FINISH THE STORY, PLEASE TRY TO UPDATE , MISS THE UPDATES OF THIS STORY AS EVERY TIME I CHECK THERE IS NO UPDATE.REQUEST TO UPDATE

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